A Slice of life

Thump!Thump! There was a loud noise at the door, 'Alright hold on,
I'm coming.' Tim yelled. Tim was in his early twenties, he had a blue
mowhawk, always dressed shabby, and addicted to heroin. Tim walked to
the door and opened it, 'Yes.' he said sarcastically.
The man at the door asked if Gwen was home, 'Are you Gwen's new
boyfriend' Tim asked him. 'Yes I am, my name is Tony' he replied. 'Nice to
meet you' Tim said. 'No, Gwen is not here right now. I think she is still
trying to get the job at that bar on 6th street' Tim replied.
'Oh, well tell her that I came by and just to give me…