Story I did for my assignment, 900 words, and is about a guy who plays Rugby and goes to War, gets a girl and lives on

Story:
Passion of war
A young male in his teen years named Jonobi White, he lived in a small suburb in Sydney called Guildford. Jonobi was a very shy person, he was skinny, but very fast and is a great Rugby Union player. He was one of the finest wingers for under 18?s in Australia, his cabinet had over 100 trophies in it. Jonobi went to a public school called
Chester Hill High, he wasn?t that smart but managed to get decent grades. He had a big brother 3 yrs older then him, and his mum wasn?t a very happy women, she always pressured him and forced him to do things which made Jonobi kind…