The man down the road

This is a creative story I created for my English class and I got a A-. It can help others come up with stories like mine and its fun and different from other creative stories you have seen!
The man down the road
Down the road there was a man who was an odd on. It was dark and the leaves in the air were blowing all over the place.
"Hey! You there! Are you ok?" Andrew asked in a scared voice. Andrew's mother always said to help sick people even if they're strangers, right after his brother disappeared.
"Uhh... Do I know you? Can we go to the mountains?"asked the man, walking towards…