2 November 2004
Short Response #6 Draft 3
<Tab/>I believe that Tonya's source's were good sources, so there really is not a reason for her to expand her research further book wise. Tonya could have took the opportunity to interview a couple of individuals that had dropped out of school, and asked them their situations on why or what had occurred in their life for them to make the decision that they were not going to finish school. If she would have had these people interviewed she could of had her essay more elaborated and could have reflected her paragraphs an individual…
