Teacher's comments: A very well told story-that the reader shares with you! 19/20
"Crash"
The sky was as clear as a calm sea, not a trace of disturbance in the distance. It was a beautiful day to be outside.
"Hey kids! Grab your bikes and let's go for a ride!" shouted my father from his workshop in the backyard. We raced to our bikes, grinning ear to ear. The anticipation was so powerful, I felt like I could ride to the moon and back.
The three of us started out, our father in front and us two kids right behind, following like geese flying south for the winter. "This is going to be fun."…
