A story I wrote for English class a fairy tale

"The Boy Who Ate More Then He Could Chew"
Once upon a time in the village of Butttercake there lived a very fat boy. This boys name was Ryan. Ryan liked to eat, and eat. No one could stop him he was so spoiled his parents had lost control of him. The town was a great place for him because of all its shops and restaurants. Anyone who walked into the town of Buttercake would be greeted by a tempting smell of food. Any type of food could be found in the town. From apple pies to zanhorrias cake a local specialty. Almost every person was at least ten pounds overweight. One morning Ryan woke…