A Persuasive Piece Concerning Capital Punishment, in Particular, the Case of Australian, Tuong van Nguyen. The Use of a Personal Anecdote MUST Be Included

Van Nguyen made a severe mistake. So did my grandmother. Only difference?
For my grandmother, their was no possibility of instead of dying, spending the remainder of her life in a small cell. Sure, crappy food, not exactly the ideal living quarters, but how much do you wanna bet she'd jump at the opportunity?
But no, unfortunately cancer doesn't provide such an ultimatum.
Different action. Different responses. Same loss. . life.
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